Fire in your eyes,burn in your heart

As promised i rewrote my story into a better version that i hav thought up,hope enjoy you do ^^.
Honestly,I do not like the presentation as..well it doesnt feel right or natural.We all hav to follow the music...which i found irritating as the music isnt that important and the people who are watching the presentation will not notice it as its not that distinguishable....mataku(geez...)..><...
I nonetheless must dance to this tune atleast until tomorrow..if we are selected more of this crap...Another thing is that no one seems to notice that the music doesnt feel right with the script.I didnt hav mission impossible and oh fortuna in mind as i wrote the script...- -;;....ah well atleast if we arent selected,that proves my theory that it is just like Rin's GFX....flashy and overated,lack substance and feel.

Everything i do i base it on feel especially on GFX or when making something.It can look flashy or hav a dozen gimmicks....i rather a more natural look.

The egg project was disapproved.So we sent a paper shedder compactor as a second project...which is alot easier to do.As a backup plan,we plan to make a sumo robot for competition purposes....

Found out that i be going to Malaysia as part of ME club activity.It will be 5 days before i go to Hong Kong if i am selected.After the Hong Kong trip,i think i be having the manga exam....dun dun dun...................doesnt seem well for loki....

I named my story instead of chapters,into tracks and the title sound more like song titles...neat isnt it ^^..another thing is that...since i am telling the story...should it be in past tense or present tense?i havnt had english lessons for like 3 years...haha so not very sure so decided to mix it up jsut cause some sound nicer than the present tense counterpart.



First track:The symphony of gunpowder and blood
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~Play some creepy ominous music,preferbly kuroki neko from black cat~
Lightning streaked across the dark purplish sky,making shatter patterns across the motionless sky.Rain poured heavily and unrelentingly.The winds were roaring fiercely like jet engines.Yes ,it a symphony of an ominous storm which bode and exudes a sense of impending doom.
A hysterical laughter filled the the canyon in which this dark symphony was held.A figure was standing,steadfastly near the end of one of the ridges,which bottom seems to lead to a bottomless abyss.Her blond hair flowing in wind provided contrast to the dark setting.Her sword illuminated with every lighting that struck the area.Rain soaked her face,almost seems like she was shedding tears,but her eerie eyes showed murderous,malice intent.Her clothes was drenched,but she wasnt even shivering in the roaring winds.Her shoulder plate was shimmering.Her gaunlet on her left arm had an evil glow.She threw a smile...Her smile was sadistic.It was like staring at a beautiful devil.
"Dont stop weakling........,continue,SHED MORE BLOOD FOR ME!"She cried as swung her sword.Arcane energy crackled through the ground,seeking the enemy of her summoner.It found her enemy and exploded into a sphere of arcane electricity.A brief scream of pain disturbed the symphony.
A man was on his knees,and was being supported upright by his sword.His body was filled with slash wounds and blood stained his tattered clothes.He was breathing heavily and was bearly even concious.Dead bodies surrounded him like weed around a flower.....but they were all dried up to the bone.Their blood and souls hav been completely drained.The man stood up and charged towards the apparent murdress.His eyes was filled with anger.He positioned his sword for a sword thrust.The sword penetrated the lady.More than half went in....but no blood was pouring out.Instead there were fine crystals disintergrating from the wound into the air.She returned the favour with an upward slash of her own.The man fell like a sack of potatoes.She glanced at her tool of murder and licked the blood of it.Her eyes instantly was filled with lust,lust for blood.
"BLEED MORE FOR ME DARLING,MORE!!!!!!!"
The man got up to his feet again.The slash that was given to him wasnt deep...and it wasnt by accident either.She wanted to torture him more.
"Please...stop this.."
His faint voice didnt reach her.The girl he knew was gone.In her place was the very same monster he killed.
"MORE!!!!!!!!"
She charged towards him.He closed his eyes as he twisted a key on the hilt of his sword like the ignition switch of a car.His sword burst into pure energy and was vibrating strongly in his right arm.
"DIE FOR ME!!!!!!"She yelled out as she leapt towards him hungerily,like a lion after a gazelle.Steel met flesh and blood.Blood spurted out like a fountain out of the man's left shoulder.
"BLOOD!!!!!!!!!BLOOD!!!!!!!!!BLOOD!!!!!!!!"
The man's face was twisted in pain.He slowly,shakyily raised his sword,to the point of where her heart should be.He opened his eyes...finally coming to a conclusion that...she cannot be saved.
"Sorry...."
He looked away as he twisted the sword handle.
*BOOOOOOOOOOM*
The bottom hilt of the sword shot out flames like a rocket taking off.
*Sound of 500 degree flames burning intensely*
The sword,flew out of his hand,instantenously pierced her heart and sent her flying into the dark skies.Something shone.Was that stars peeking out of the dark sky,No....They were tears was streaming out of her eyes...a small final sign of humanity.
*3,2,1 some funky techno music plays*
~the whole screen shatters~
The same man awakes,in the sancitity of his own room.It was a nightmare,or more appropriately,a recollection fo his hated memory.His phone was ringing.He searched his bed for his phone with his half opened eyes.He grab hold of the phone under his pillow and flipped it open.A blurry face appeared on the phone screen.A 3G call.
"Wake up already,thats the 5th time i am calling you....you could hav more manners and answer it the first time"The face resolution becomes more clearer.It was a girl but she has a white blindfold on and a headset.Her blue hair was neatly center parted.Her faced turned into a more annoyed version when the man didnt answer her.
"LOKI!!!!!!!!"her irritated voice became an alarm clock to Loki.
"Yes i am here...wide awake...see....- -;;.Its only 7am and you are already nagging J.C."
J.C never changes..always had to be so right about things and never seems to realise that she is nagging and never realise that she is nagging.
"Well,you are already late for school Loki,and Lanna wont like it if you are late....."her gleefully grin grew wider.
"PAYCUT....!Muhahahahahaha"J.C let out an evil laugh.
"Okay,okay J.C get off my line so that i can go already shessh"
"Oh and investigate the park near your school after school...there was a sudden spark in arcane energy thi......."
"Hai hai,bwye"Loki flipped his phone down before J.C could finish.He got up and grabbed his towel and went into the bathroom.
*light switches on,but the bathroom was pink in colour*
The tapwater runs as she wet a towel and wiped her face with it,carefully going through every features on her face.Her eyes was heavy as she did it....she then lazily pressed her tube of toothpaste onto her toothbrush.She attempted to put the toothbrush but misses her mouth several times.Lack of sleep apparently messed up her coordination and sense of direction.She finally brushed her teeth and proceed to shower...with her sleeping clothes still on(XD).
*goes back to Loki*
Loki was already dressed in a neat white shirt and black pants,his school uniform.A pair of guns,one black,the other sliver was hanging from its holdster from his coat.The coat was jet black and had an insignia on it that read "TEMPEST" on the left and "LEGENDS" on the right.It was hanging behind the door to his room.His room was pretty undecorated and plain.
He grabbed his bag and headed for the door.He noticed his apartment was already empty.....as he didnt hear his riotous mother anywhere in the house.
"Mother must hav gone to the hospital early again"
Glances over to the table on the kitchen.
"And forgotten to fee her son again..- -;;...."
Noticed that the clock on the wall read 7.20am....
"WTF????????????LATE!!!!!!"
Loki wore his shoes without tying up the shoe laces and proceeded to dash to school which coincidentally wasnt that far.
*goes back to the other girl*
The sky was light orange as the sun is making its way out from the previous night sky as Hati resumes his job of chasing after the sun.Clouds were puffy and wind was calm.The makings of a beautiful day.
She was also making her way to school.Her walking was.....not steady as it was more to swaying side to side.Her uniform was same of that of loki's.Same school.
"I,Ciel Yamato must not stay up late again......It would be bad if i fell asleep in class...i am a model student*Picture of her holding an award and people cheering for her in the back ground* after all^^"Ciel said to herself
"Not my fault last night horror movie was so addictive......"Making excuse for her own fault....
Loki bumped into her as she swayed to the left,causing her to spin and fall.
*the sound of glass shattering*
"Sorry,already is late i am"Loki shouted as he continued to dash.
Ciel landed flat on the floor on her butt,although not bothered that someone knocked into her.
"Was that the headless ghost rider?"
*Waved at the figure in the distance*Apparently still half awake(XD)
A sense of coldness envelopes her.What is this feeling?She wondered.Its strange..she felt that there is something..but couldnt make sense what it is as it was a new sensation.She just noticed her watch read 7.30am.
"hehehe hey i am late....."
a few moments of slience as reality sinks in....
"I AM LATE!!!!!!!!!!!!"She dashed to the school gate that wasnt so far off.
"oooo...she make a delicious snack....young girl's blood taste soo sweet...and they are so tender and soft to touch...and their screams...hehehehehe..makes its so fun...."A being was observing Ciel as she ran.He licked his lips in ecstasy at the thought of his prey.

(Note that the being in the end is a possessed so therefore he is visible to normal humans and they then to go overboard in feeding than normal Deimoses)
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